Our idea was to have some comedic twist through the use of a small child, to interrupt the bath thriller scene. The main plan was to reshoot Scarlett sitting up, opening her eyes and have a child walk inn and say something to annoy Scarlett's character and for the title to run. Our main edit to the storyboard was:
- Scarlett sits up
- Duration - 4 seconds (slow mo)
- Shot type - medium to close up
- Sound - water washes around her
- Edit - straight cut
- Door handle twists open
- Duration - 2 seconds
- Shot type - close up
- Sound - creaking of door handle
- Edit - straight cut
- Eyes open
- Duration - 1 second
- Shot type - medium shot
- Sound - previous music finishes
- Edit - straight cut
- Door creaks open
- Duration - 3 seconds
- Shot type - medium shot
- Sound - creak of door
- Edit - straight cut
- Eyes dart around to the sound
- Duration - 1 second
- Shot type - medium shot
- Sound - strings tremolo
- Edit - straight cut
- Lyla's feet in doorway
- Duration - 2 seconds
- Shot type - close up
- Sound - crash of cymbals when the feet first appear
- Edit - straight cut
- Scarlett spins around to face Lyla in room
- Duration - 2 seconds
- Shot type - medium shot
- Sound - cymbals with underlying strings in crescendo
- Edit - straight cut
- Lyla says something funny to Scarlett
- Duration - 3 seconds
- Shot type - Long shot
- Sound - "Can you help me brush my teeth"
- Edit - Straight cut
- Scarlett's face is annoyed at Lyla
- Duration - 2 seconds
- Shot type - medium shot
- Sound - slightly rock music starts
- Edit - zoom into the white of the bath
- Title screen, written in ketchup
- Duration - 5 seconds
- Shot type - medium shot
- Sound - music continues
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